Weekend Writing Warriors 09/28/13

Weekend Writing Warriors is a blog-hop taking place every Saturday, co-ordinated by http://www.wewriwa.com/.

Click through to the WeWriWa site to see a list of participants.In it, authors share only eight sentences from something they’ve written or are currently working on. So without further ado, here are my eight sentences!
Collins’ fingers dipped into his open fly and withdrew a monster of a cock that was a good six inches before it was even hard.

Ethan’s tongue darted out to wet his lips.

It was a beautiful cock. He’d only ever seen dicks that magnificent on Tumblr, which seemed to be flooded with selfies from people way more hung than himself. And he’d jerked off to so many of them, imagining what it must be like to suck on something so vast.

“I’m not a whore,” he found himself croaking.

Collins’s smirk widened. “Kneel down and suck it, Ethan.”
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2 Comments:

  1. Well done! Nice mix of physical description with thoughts and dialog. The mention of Tumblr adds realism.

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